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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: July 03, 2017, 06:54:48 PM »
More of Scene 127:
And that's when today's first quote -
- comes up, followed by today's second quote -
- coming up.
And when it comes to the dialogue and the notations, Stokes delivers his first line as "Where did you see her?" with the "David" dropped - and despite the changes DC made, Todd actually only gets to say "You don't believe he saw--" before Stokes cuts him off, and despite DC's other notation for Todd, he doesn't get a close-up because, worse than no close-up, he delivers the line off camera - and when Stokes cuts Todd off, he delivers today's first quote exactly as scripted - but when it comes to David, his actual response is "At the old swimming pool", with "old" being added to DC's script in the same way that "really" is added to Todd's line, plus DC has a notation that David would be seen in closeup, which as we can see in today's second capture -
- he obviously isn't - and in the background we see Liz reacting to all this as she prepares to say something. But we'll deal with what Liz says next time...
STOKES Where did you see her, David? TODD really |_______ CU TODD Professor, you don't^believe |
And that's when today's first quote -
Page 55/Scene 127 - Stokes: 'Where did you see her?'
- comes up, followed by today's second quote -
Page 55/Scene 127 - David: 'At the swimming pool.'
- coming up.
And when it comes to the dialogue and the notations, Stokes delivers his first line as "Where did you see her?" with the "David" dropped - and despite the changes DC made, Todd actually only gets to say "You don't believe he saw--" before Stokes cuts him off, and despite DC's other notation for Todd, he doesn't get a close-up because, worse than no close-up, he delivers the line off camera - and when Stokes cuts Todd off, he delivers today's first quote exactly as scripted - but when it comes to David, his actual response is "At the old swimming pool", with "old" being added to DC's script in the same way that "really" is added to Todd's line, plus DC has a notation that David would be seen in closeup, which as we can see in today's second capture -
- he obviously isn't - and in the background we see Liz reacting to all this as she prepares to say something. But we'll deal with what Liz says next time...