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Current Talk '24 I / Re: And Now The Return of Another New Slideshow (Sort of), Part 2 [**Now featuring alternate versions of scenes - see replies #18,#21,#23,#49,#64,#69,#76,#88,#90,#100,#105,#107,#115**]
« on: February 01, 2017, 11:10:33 PM »
And here's the original draft's version of Jeff discovery that Daphne has been attacked:
37 EXT. CAR 37 as it skids to a halt. Jeff jumps out as the CAMERA TRUCKS him to the woman. She turns sees him, SCREAMS and runs. JEFF (running after her) Wait, what's wrong? 37 CONTD CONTD 37 DAPHNE (running from him) No...no... 38 EXT. ROAD - NIGHT - LONG SHOT 38 Illuminated by the headlights, Jeff catches the woman. She fights him. SERIES OF INTERCUTTING CLOSE UPS DAPHNE Don't touch me! JEFF Daphne. It's Jeff, what's happened? JEFF - DAPHNE He turns her to him. She is crying. JEFF My God! 39 JEFF'S POV - DAPHNE 39 CAMERA starts on her tear stained face, then PANS down. We see her neck, with two fang marks. Blood runs from the open wound. With a MOAN, she faints, her face passing the CAMERA as she goes down. |