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Calendar Events / Announcements '18 / Re: The Originals
« on: July 10, 2018, 09:14:11 PM »
Thanks for sharing, Josette.
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I had a problem with the pacing of the book. They would spend a lot of time on one particular plot and then abruptly move onto something else and it seemed to take an eternity to get back to the original storyline. Subplots are part and parcel of comic books and soap operas but they need to be better balanced than they are here.
Plus, you've also got flashbacks to the 18th century which were likely deemed necessary to keep Angelique in the book.
The story elements don't blend together the way that they should and it keeps the book unfocused. This would have been a bit more acceptable if the book came out a more regular schedule. But there were so many production delays that made the story extremely difficult to follow.